Sample 6: Movie Review - Sonic the Hedgehog 2

Travel back to the early 90s, an era where Sega proudly claimed that they did what Nintendon’t, and engage with this action-packed sequel ripped straight from classic Sonic the Hedgehog games.

            If the first Sonic movie was designed to get you invested in Sonic as a character, this movie was designed to bring you a solid glimpse of the depth of Sonic’s world.  Bringing in two more iconic Sonic characters that old fans will love and new fans will come to love in the genius fox Tails and the powerful echidna Knuckles.  With more video game lore, this movie makes it clear that Sonic is the main character instead of sharing the spotlight with a human road trip buddy like he did in the first film.

            That isn’t to say that the humans Tom and Maddie from the first movie are completely absent.  Just sidelined a bit to make room for Sonic to take center stage himself.  The scenes with them at the wedding of Maddie’s sister Rachel can seem like you’re watching a wedding-themed romantic comedy instead of a Sonic the Hedgehog movie, but they don’t detract from the film.  Instead, they are used to reflect a growing relationship between Tom, Maddie, and Sonic: with Tom and Maddie as the parents to a still teenage Sonic the Hedgehog—a teenager who needs to be given space in order to grow and mature.

            That space opens up the plot so that Tails can come in and take Tom’s role from the first film as the secondary protagonist and sidekick to Sonic.  Colleen O’Shaughnessy takes her voicing of Tails from animation to the big screen in this film and portrays Tails as a Sonic fanboy excited to meet his hero.  Though Tails can easily seem overshadowed by other scenery chewing characters, the fanboy fox’s quiet nature allows him to play perfectly off Sonic without stealing the show from the title character.

            Of course, Tails doesn’t steal the show for one big reason: that job belongs to Idris Elba as Knuckles the Echidna.  Idris Elba does a fantastic job as Knuckles, bringing a level of seriousness to the role of the honourable echidna warrior—when he’s not being used for comedic effect.  Similar to Drax from Guardians of the Galaxy, Knuckles is the classic fish-out-of-water character who makes you laugh specifically because he takes everything seriously and does not understand social conventions.  Especially handshakes.  Do not offer Knuckles a handshake.

            But Knuckles sense of humour does nothing to detract from him being a genuine and terrifying threat to Sonic.  After the first movie made Dr. Robotnik obsessed with Sonic’s power—even powering his own machines with just one quill from Sonic—this movie very quickly throws that idea out the window with Knuckles beating Sonic with ease in their first fight, all with the infamous line from the trailer: “Do I look like I need your power?”  As future fights continue to result in Sonic running from Knuckles, or holding Knuckles to a stand-still at best, the movie ups the tension from the previous film with a threat the audience isn’t sure Sonic can defeat.  With the power Knuckles displays in early encounters with Sonic, there is tension in every scene they share.

            And all of this says absolutely nothing about the return of Jim Carrey as Dr. Robotnik.  Much like in the first Sonic movie, Carrey gets to have himself a blast bringing his over-the-top acting from his 90s comedies back into the movies one more time.  Whenever Jim Carrey is on screen you’re getting a nice slice of hammy, cheesy, villainy to chow down on.

              As the movie reaches its climax, fans of the classic video games will recognize how much this movie feels like a merging of the first Sonic the Hedgehog movie with the plot elements of the Genesis video games Sonic 2, Sonic 3, and Sonic & Knuckles.  Bringing in a level of action that feels exactly like the final boss fights against Dr. Robotnik in the classic games.  The action feels right out of the climax of a marvel movie.

            Through all the action, video game references, and comedic moments, the one thing that this movie comes back to is found family and friends.  Finding your squad, the people who have your back no matter what.

            That said, with a movie that ups the stakes while keeping what made the first Sonic the Hedgehog movie great, if you enjoyed the first one there is no reason why you would dislike this comedic and action-packed sequel.

Sample 5: Informative Article - "What Makes Us Work?"

Motivation makes the world go round.  It’s what gets us up in the morning, what helps us get through work, and what lets us enjoy our hobbies.  What motivates a person can vary widely, but it can be the most important thing a person needs to get the energy, will, and drive to put in their best efforts. 

            James Sales’ motivational maps provide a list of the nine things that could motivate a person to take action, work hard, and achieve their goals.  Each person ranks the nine categories differently, resulting in thousands of different combinations for high, medium, and low motivators.  What motivates a person might change over time, but trying to force that change is like trying to alter their entire personality: it won’t succeed unless they want to change, and regardless it will be a slow and gradual shift.  That’s why it is so important to know all the possible motivators: to identify what motivates other people, and maybe get better clarity on just what motivates you.

This article will discuss each one of the nine motivators: what they are, what they want, and some important dos and don’ts for dealing with people who have it as a high motivator.  Everyone has about 2-4 motivators in each of the three zones: High, Medium, and Low.  So before introducing the motivators, it is important to know the difference between high, medium and low.

        High Motivators are what make a person want to keep doing something day-after-day for the rest of their life.  Hobbies can sometimes fulfill high motivators, but that requires time and energy for the hobby outside work hours.  Though it might take months or years, when high motivators are not met burnout, exhaustion, fatigue, and even depression, are almost inevitable.

            Medium Motivators are the cherry-on-top if high motivators are already met, or a short-term solution if they’re not.  While high motivators work long-term, medium motivators slowly become less effective if they are a person’s only motivation.  If a person is struggling but still trying, their medium motivators are probably met but their high motivators are not.

             Low Motivators are the boring or unpleasant motivators.  Getting someone to work hard or start a new hobby using their low motivators is almost impossible because they are getting nothing they want out of the work or hobby.  Low motivators show the biggest reason it is important to understand motivators: it is impossible to appeal to everyone with the same thing.

Now that High, Medium, and Low Motivators have been explained, we can move to the 9 Motivators:

Number 1: The Defender

            The Defender is motivated by safety, stability, and predictability.  They likely want a steady job with health insurance, a pension plan, sick days, vacation time, and consistent hours.  This motivator tends to be higher among people with a spouse or kids, as it reflects the need to be the steady rock that others can depend on, though that is not always the case.

            Do:      Give them a consistent paycheque and make their work hours the same every week.  Do not make them fight to use sick days, vacation days, and health insurance.  Understand that many people with this type have families and might need to prioritize their family.

            Don’t: Change their schedule every week, make their pay widely vary based on sales or some other metric, or leave them feeling like their job is insecure and they could be fired or let go at any moment.  Consistency and reliability are what keep them around.

Number 2: The Friend

            The Friend is motivated by belonging and friendship.  They want to be in collaborative environments where everyone works together to solve problems.  The kind of person who is happy to help out a co-worker who needs a hand, and wants co-workers who are happy to help them when they need it.  The most likely motivator type to want to be friends with their co-workers.

            Do:      Create an environment where co-workers are in collaboration, not competition.  Let them chat with co-workers at least sometimes.  Let them work in teams with their coworkers and use joint space to collaborate.

            Don’t: Force them to work alone or clamp down too hard on office chatter and socializing in the workplace.  Tell them to come into work when they have plans with family or friends, they often need chances to socialize whether at work or not.

Number 3: The Star

            The Star wants respect, recognition, and esteem.  They value status and want to be thanked for the work they do.  They are often motivated by titles and jobs that command respect—like doctors and lawyers—but are also motivated by awards that let them feel acknowledged and appreciated.  They often want to be in the spotlight, and hate being ignored and neglected.

            Do:      Give them opportunities to be thanked and acknowledged.  Let them be in the spotlight.  Help them get their name out and be recognized for their work.  Thank and appreciate them for the little things.  This can be as simple as thanking them for doing their job or chores.

            Don’t: Withhold praise unless they go above and beyond what is expected of them.  Fail to give them proper credit for their work.  Ignore them or insult their efforts, they are often people who need external validation from others to feel good about themselves.

Number 4: The Director

            The Director wants power, influence, and control over other people and resources.  Their goal is to be in leadership positions one day.  They are motivated by opportunities to be in charge and show that they can manage and direct others.  They want promotions, a ranking system or organized structure in their hobbies, and need to feel like there is room to grow and reach the top.

            Do:      Give them opportunities to be in charge of a team and show their leadership skills.  Make promotions and opportunities to rise in the company achievable to them if they work hard.  In terms of hobbies, they want to be the coach or learn the skills well enough to teach others.

            Don’t: Keep them in the same position for years and years, they need upward mobility.  Don’t make them work independently, deny them chances to take the lead, or force them to always work underneath other people.

Number 5: The Builder

            The Builder wants money, material possessions, and an above average living.  They want raises, can be happy to work overtime if they are getting overtime pay, and might even pursue side hustles as their hobbies.  Overall, the builder is someone for whom money can buy happiness, so how well they are paid is the largest factor to them in the work they do.

            Do:      Pay at or above market value for their skills, they might look for higher paying opportunities elsewhere if you don’t.  Consistent raises, and opportunities to make more money by taking on additional work will also appeal to them.

            Don’t: Fail to give adequate raises. Fail to offer chances to make more money.  Increase their workload without increasing their pay.

Number 6: The Expert

            The Expert seeks knowledge, mastery, and specialization.  The Expert is often someone who has a specialized skill they are passionate about.  They are motivated by opportunities to learn more about their field, and show their expertise.  More so than most other motivators, these are the people most interested in finding work in the field they have education and experience in.

            Do:      Give them opportunities to use their skills, take training to improve their skills, and let them show their expertise.  Understand that their expertise will need an outlet either at work or through hobbies.

            Don’t: Ignore their expertise, or make them spend a majority of their time on work that is not centered around their chosen skills.

Number 7: The Searcher

            The Searcher seeks meaning, purpose, and wants to make a difference.  They need to know that what they are doing matters, will help other people, or make the world a better place.  They tend towards caring-oriented positions such as doctors, teachers, and social workers.  Often, but not always, prefer public-oriented positions where they can see that they are helping others.

            Do:      Show them the big picture.  Make sure they know how the work they are doing helps others or will have a positive impact on the world.  Give them work that lets them see the impact they are having.  Show them that you care as much as they do.

            Don’t: Focus on profits or budgets, they are more likely to care about how many people they helped.  Ignore or reject their efforts to do things like make the office more environmentally friendly or bring awareness to social issues.  Give them a reason to think you don’t care.

Number 8: The Spirit

            The Spirit seeks freedom, autonomy, and independence.  A high motivator among most entrepreneurs, they want to do the work their way, with as little supervision as possible.  They are good at reaching deadlines but feel untrusted and disrespected if checked up on too often.  Give them the freedom to do what they want when they want and they’ll often provide great results.

            Do:      Give them the big picture and the desired end result so that they know what to aim for.  Leave them be to get the work done. Give them room to bend the rules a bit in order to do what works best for them personally.  Let them learn skills and hobbies at their own pace.

            Don’t: Constantly check on their progress, force them to attend meetings that don’t really pertain to them, or be a stickler for rules or procedures. Micromanage them, they can often end up as the people who consider even normal levels of management and supervision to be too much.

Number 9: The Creator

            The Creator seeks innovation, creativity, and change.  These are the actors, artists, musicians, writers, dancers, and the innovators who want to come up with new and creative ways to do things.  They are most energized when they get to be creative, when they get to think and figure out how to do something instead of just repeating what someone else has done before.

            Do:      Welcome new ideas and be willing to change things if they come up with a good idea.  Give them opportunities to be creative and problems that need solving.  Let them put their personal touch on projects as it helps them feel engaged in their work.

            Don’t: Trap them in a routine for too long, they get bored easily and will want something new to do.  Don’t discourage new ideas or originality, they get stifled and unmotivated when they can’t express themselves and show off their creative problem solving.

            When you look at these lists, it becomes easy to see how different people will be motivated by different things and how people might seek out different work and hobbies if their motivators are not met.  Someone who is mostly a Defender and Builder might love a 9-5 job that pays very well and offers bonuses and overtime pay, while a Creative and Star person would prefer to get a job in entertainment where they can get their name out into the world as an actor or musician.  The Expert and Spirit person might want to go into business for themselves using their expert skills and might roll their eyes at the idea of a job with a steady paycheque and retirement plan if the job has nothing to do with their skills. 

 But no matter what motivates anyone, the final truth of all these motivators is that people are motivated and de-motivated by different things and that society gets nowhere if it believes that one motivator can work for everyone.Doing so is no different from the classic attempt to shove a square peg in a round hole: it doesn’t work. All you get is struggle and frustration from both the person whose needs are not met and from society for expecting the person to fit in.But now, with these motivators, it is easier to recognize when a person is a square peg, and ensure that a square hole is found for them.

Writing Sample 4: Business About Page Example

For almost thirty years, Joe’s Dojo has stood as a pillar of the community.  Founded by Joseph Dubois twenty-seven years ago, Joe’s Dojo has been a place of learning and training for those of all ages interested in the martial arts.  From private lessons, to classes for children, seniors, women, men, and more, Joe’s Dojo has been there for the community through good times and bad.

Since the day the dojo opened, Joe has prided himself on the help that he offers to those who need it.  His self-defence basics for women class—offered for free—has helped hundreds of women feel safer walking the streets.  His free classes for kids and teens have been a tremendous support in maintaining the safety of the youth in the community, giving many of them a place to go after school that kept them off the streets.

Joseph Dubois started his career in the martial arts at an early age.  When his high school classmates were trying out for the football team, Joseph Dubois was earning his first black belt in Kung Fu.  Before the age of twenty-five Joseph had earned similar black belts in Muai Thai, Aikido, and Jiu Jitsu.  Working as a martial arts instructor at other gyms even as a teenager, Joe has spent every day of his adult life and most of his teenage years teaching others.

A part of his local neighbourhood watch program, Joe has helped de-escalate dangerous situations in the community for years.  Joe has even taken his training to local police units, training them in both hand-to-hand combat and in de-escalation tactics they can use before resorting to force.

On a professional level, Joe’s Dojo has also proven itself in the students it has given to the world of martial arts, with students from Joe’s Dojo winning not only local martial arts competitions but receiving national and even international acclaim.Students trained by Joseph Dubois have gone on to take their skill into professions including law enforcement, the military, and even competitors and season champions in TV shows about athleticism and combat prowess.When it comes to the best training in martial arts in the world, few can match the teachings at Joe’s Dojo.

Sample Article 3: Movie Review

Disney’s Aladdin, Live Action Spoiler-Lite Review (Though do I really need to say that. Y’all know the story already.)

Disney’s Live Action Aladdin was everything a fan of the original could have hoped for. It had an Aladdin whom they took the time to make even more lovable, showed how he is even more of a diamond in the rough, and gave him some endearing flaws like social awkwardness in crowds.

Jafar’s backstory ramped up his villainy by giving him motivations beyond “I’m evil and want to rule”, especially by giving him a truly villainous life philosophy in his belief that “You’re either the most powerful person in the room or you’re nothing.” The film also added backstory that Jafar was once a streetrat too, thus making him a better foil for our Aladdin: two men from the same background but look at what they became.

Will Smith as the genie was brilliant, and very Will Smith. He was fun, sarcastic, and got his own story arc beyond just helping Aladdin. You could tell in every scene he was in that he was having fun. He wasn’t Robin Williams, and he didn’t try to be, and I think that’s what helped him pull it off. He didn’t try to fill someone’s shoes, he decided to get new shoes and make the role his own.

But Jasmine. Oh my gosh. This movie made her amazing! Seriously, Jasmine is the best part of this movie. She gets the movie’s new song “Speechless” and if you were looking for the next Disney Girl Power anthem like “Let It Go” from Frozen or “How Far I’ll Go” from Moana then you have it, The song literally left me well...the title of the song. They changed Jasmine’s motivations, and made her a complete badass in the process. Not that she wasn’t badass before, but seriously, this movie upped it so far. Minor Spoiler here, but let’s just say that they ditched that old “If I marry, I want it to be for love.” motivation of hers and replaced it with “Listen, no foreign prince could rule this country better than me, so stop trying to marry me off or shut me up because you can shove those sexist old fashioned laws down your pie hole and make me Sultan.”

The movie was overall incredible. Beautiful choreography right out of a Bollywood musical number, a lot of fun, a lot of heart, and a lot more girl power than I was expecting.

Too Long, didn’t read? then let me make this review shorter for you:

You Go Jasmine! Fight The Patriarchy!

Sample Article 2: Product Advertisement

The Following is a Fictional Advertisement for a Fictional product.

Imagine the following:

It is late at night, dark, a cold fall evening.  You are in the woods near your cabin, collecting firewood because the power has gone out.  You bend down to pick up some kindling, when you hear the sound of something in the woods.  You look up, and through the darkness you make out a form that you initially believe is human. But then the moon’s light adjusts ever so slightly and you get a look at the creature: blood all over its face and arms, a crazed look in its eyes, and enlarged canine teeth glistening in the night’s dim light.  You tremble as you realize that standing a mere thirty feet away from you…is a Vampire.  It sniffs the air, and looks straight at you…right before it leaps.  You start to run, but you drop the firewood you were carrying, tripping over it and falling to the ground.  The Vampire lands on top of you.  You try to fight it off, but the Vampire is clearly stronger than you.  You only have one hope left.  You reach down to your belt and pull out your SunFlare Flashlight.  Frantically, you turn the light on.  And the Vampire screams.  As the light touches the Vampire’s skin, smoke rises up, the skin burning and turning to ash.  You force the flashlight right in the vampire’s face and it screams in your ear as the final pieces of its horrendous form dissolve.  You stand up, brush off the vampire ash covering your clothing, pickup your firewood and head back to the cabin.  You are alive today because you remembered your SunFlare Flashlight.

               SunFlare Flashlights.  Unleash the Sun!

Sample Article 1: Newspaper Article Style

The Following sample article is fictional, but exists to show an example of my writing in a journalist format.

New York Business Owner Oroku Saki allegedly tied to Foot Clan gang

Oroku Saki, New York business owner and philanthropist, has been accused of being “The Shredder” the criminal leader of the ninja-themed gang known as the Foot Clan.

Sources state that members of the Foot Clan have been seen entering and leaving the head office of Saki’s businesses, and have also been seen at the sites of several of Oroku Saki’s affiliated businesses, including Stockman Enterprises.

These claims have been refuted by Saki’s granddaughter and head of public relations, Karai Saki, who has claimed that these statements “Are meant to besmirch the reputation of a man and company dedicated to not just technological advancement, but towards humanitarian and rehabilitation work.”  Some of that rehabilitation work includes providing jobs to former criminals such as the self-proclaimed “Bonnie-and-Clyde of our time” duo Anton Zeck and Ivan Steranko, more commonly known as Bebop and Rocksteady.

Police are currently seeking a warrant to search the premises for further evidence regarding these allegations.  Karai, along with head of security Arnold Hun Jones, have stated that any attempt to get a warrant on their business will be challenged in court. Oroku Saki’s recent donations to the re-election campaign of New York’s mayor seem to many to be an attempt to put pressure on the NYPD to drop the investigation.

Coming over to New York from Japan only several years ago, the time between Mr. Saki’s arrival in New York and the arrival of the Foot Clan seem to be simultaneous.  Since his arrival, Saki’s businesses have engaged in seeking military contracts for the creation of advanced weaponry from General Krang as well as philanthropic work supporting the rise of several martial arts dojos in inner-city neighbourhoods.

Unconfirmed sources claim that Saki’s business interests have included genetics research that has resulted in the creation of enlarged monsters including human-sized rodents and reptiles.

Our paper reached out to Oroku Saki personally for comment but did not receive word prior to publication.